Robert was very prompt and very accurate. Thanks a lot!
5.0
CUP 韩鹏
| 2016-04-13
| 使用过服务1次
Dear Adam,
Thank you for your kindness comments and careful modification, I am so excited that the work is now so good after your revisement. But I still have some questions, my english is poor, so I wish you will forgive me.
1. Another article written by my brother entitled "The influence mechanism of the precipitate/austenite interfacial C-enrichment on the intergranular corrosion sensibility in 310S stainless steel", the editor have question as "There are errors of English which must be corrected. For example, in the title, stating 'the influence mechanism of...' is not correct." What I mean is the title in my paper, you have changed "study on the " to "Influence of", is that suitble according to the editor?
2. Based on afore mentioned insights, If it will be change, the writting in abstract section, line 2 from top, the statement "the influence of " and the statement "influence of " in the last sentence of the abstract section will be changed, too? Thank you.
3, Page 2, red comment about the modification, I can't unstand the explaination about "... on top of each other....” sorry for that.
4. Page 3, line 3-5 from top. "The potentiodynamic polarization curves of L245 steel in stratum water saturated with H2S, stratum water with various concentrations of IM, and stratum water with various concentrations of IM+OP were measured at 75 ℃", is that have the same meaning with : "stratum water saturated with H2S, stratum water saturated with H2S and with various concentrations of IM and stratum water saturated with H2S and with various concentrations of IM+OP were measured at 75 ℃?
5. The caption of Fig. 5, “….. ; measured for 168h at 75℃”, please check it. Thank you.
6. Page7, line 9-10 from bottom, the writing “… . showed that…”, is this type of grammer is suitable? If I made a misunderstanding, please forgive me, because I am amature in English.
7. I’m so sorry that the caption of Fig. 9 was totally wrong, the rig ht writing is “Fig. 9 The surface morphologies after L245 steel was immersed in (a) 3 wt% NaCl solution without inhibitor, (b) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM and (c) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM+OP; The surface potentials after L245 steel was immersed in (d) 3 wt% NaCl solution without inhibitor, (e) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM and (f) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM+OP; (g) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (d), (h) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (e) and (i) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (f).” Please help me to corrected it, thank you and sorry for that again.
Thank you again for your hard and careful work. Wish you have a good day and looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Peng Han
5.0
邓立雅
| 2016-04-02
Fast and Professional-I am 200% satisfied with the service :) Jayne is amazing.
4.0
吴佳佑
| 2016-03-25
品质很好，也在时间内完稿，以后会持续使用。
5.0
柯雅玲
| 2016-03-07
James was a wonderful editor and a commentator. He understood the main theme of my dissertation clearly and clarified the questions very well.
5.0
迪乐
| 2016-02-09
| 使用过服务2次
thank you !
5.0
迪乐
| 2016-02-08
| 使用过服务2次
I apologise for the late thank you . Dear James , I knew my paper could be a total mess , thanks for the careful revision . It really helped a lot !! I wish you a happy new year !
徐若华 | 2016-06-11
这是English literature课堂的research paper，比预定的48小时还要提早完稿，而且句子也改得相当简洁。
邱建庭 | 2016-05-09
Robert was very prompt and very accurate. Thanks a lot!
CUP 韩鹏 | 2016-04-13 | 使用过服务1次
Dear Adam, Thank you for your kindness comments and careful modification, I am so excited that the work is now so good after your revisement. But I still have some questions, my english is poor, so I wish you will forgive me. 1. Another article written by my brother entitled "The influence mechanism of the precipitate/austenite interfacial C-enrichment on the intergranular corrosion sensibility in 310S stainless steel", the editor have question as "There are errors of English which must be corrected. For example, in the title, stating 'the influence mechanism of...' is not correct." What I mean is the title in my paper, you have changed "study on the " to "Influence of", is that suitble according to the editor? 2. Based on afore mentioned insights, If it will be change, the writting in abstract section, line 2 from top, the statement "the influence of " and the statement "influence of " in the last sentence of the abstract section will be changed, too? Thank you. 3, Page 2, red comment about the modification, I can't unstand the explaination about "... on top of each other....” sorry for that. 4. Page 3, line 3-5 from top. "The potentiodynamic polarization curves of L245 steel in stratum water saturated with H2S, stratum water with various concentrations of IM, and stratum water with various concentrations of IM+OP were measured at 75 ℃", is that have the same meaning with : "stratum water saturated with H2S, stratum water saturated with H2S and with various concentrations of IM and stratum water saturated with H2S and with various concentrations of IM+OP were measured at 75 ℃? 5. The caption of Fig. 5, “….. ; measured for 168h at 75℃”, please check it. Thank you. 6. Page7, line 9-10 from bottom, the writing “… . showed that…”, is this type of grammer is suitable? If I made a misunderstanding, please forgive me, because I am amature in English. 7. I’m so sorry that the caption of Fig. 9 was totally wrong, the rig ht writing is “Fig. 9 The surface morphologies after L245 steel was immersed in (a) 3 wt% NaCl solution without inhibitor, (b) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM and (c) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM+OP; The surface potentials after L245 steel was immersed in (d) 3 wt% NaCl solution without inhibitor, (e) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM and (f) 3 wt% NaCl solution with 90 mg L-1 IM+OP; (g) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (d), (h) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (e) and (i) shows the line analysis of surface potential in (f).” Please help me to corrected it, thank you and sorry for that again. Thank you again for your hard and careful work. Wish you have a good day and looking forward to your reply! Yours, Peng Han
邓立雅 | 2016-04-02
Fast and Professional-I am 200% satisfied with the service :) Jayne is amazing.
吴佳佑 | 2016-03-25
品质很好，也在时间内完稿，以后会持续使用。
柯雅玲 | 2016-03-07
James was a wonderful editor and a commentator. He understood the main theme of my dissertation clearly and clarified the questions very well.
迪乐 | 2016-02-09 | 使用过服务2次
thank you !
迪乐 | 2016-02-08 | 使用过服务2次
I apologise for the late thank you . Dear James , I knew my paper could be a total mess , thanks for the careful revision . It really helped a lot !! I wish you a happy new year !
苏晨恩 | 2016-01-15
润色的很满意，旁边都有说解释说明，对于英文学习来说非常有用。
张滕浩 | 2015-11-15
非常仔细的润色批改，非常满意