2018免费修改留学申请文书活动_第一周幸运儿公布

学业计划(SOP),留学文书,留学申请(硕士),自我陈述(PS)

英文文书润色
第一周中奖幸运儿的修改完稿已经列出于最下方,请大家参考!

想参加免费润色留学文书的朋友们,请参考活动办法

参加办法:

  1. 找到【霍华斯Wordvice微博主页】。
  2. 在此活动置顶博文下方并『评论』下面完整一行字:我要WORDVICE免费修改留学文书,并将需要润色的文书发送至admissions@wordvice.com。
  3. 以上步骤都完成后,就敬请期待幸运降临,抽中的小伙伴我们会单独私信联系哦。

 

九月似乎大家都还没有准备好文件,参加的人还不是很踊跃,希望大家赶快着手准备申请资料,不要错过这难得的机会唷!

修改完稿内可以看见 1.追踪修订痕迹(轻松比对修改前后文), 2. 右边是外籍母语编辑的整体评价跟细节评价(例如单词选用或冗句删除的原因)。

*修改标准为官网付费标准

第一周幸运儿使用感言

谢谢wordvice Gali L.专业的批改,自己写好sop真的很不简单,但是透过专业角度逐字逐句以及架构的分析,

可以更了解将来要如何改善sop和写作逻辑,很高兴把握了这次活动机会。

由编辑Gail, L.修改

Comment:

Thank you for using wordvice! Your statement of purpose has a good balance between stating your career and professional goals and describing your achievement, including showcasing why you will be successful in their program. I have edited your document carefully to eliminate errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation, while also refining word choice and sentence structure to improve clarity.

The second comment addresses the tone of the essay. My comment is a little long, but I would recommend you read and review the comment carefully and consider how you might make the tone of this essay more engaging and/or personal — perhaps by adding a greater level of detail in your description of your experiences and/or by explaining your personal motivations for your marketing philosophy.

Please let me know if you have any questions about these edits or comments. And feel free to request me by name (Gail L.) if you need editing services in the future!

 

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