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quickly\u201d, \u201cran quickly\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u66f4\u5f3a\u70c8\u7684\u52a8\u8bcd\uff1a&nbsp;<em>\u201cdevoured\u201d, \u201crushed\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4ee5\u4e0b\u662f\u53ef\u4ee5\u4ece\u6587\u7ae0\u4e2d\u5220\u9664\u7684\u5e38\u89c1\u526f\u8bcd\u5217\u8868\uff1a<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"800\" height=\"1016\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091324\/5.jpg\" alt=\"\u7559\u5b66\u6587\u4e66\u5e38\u89c1\u526f\u8bcd\u5217\u8868\" class=\"wp-image-940\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091324\/5.jpg 800w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091324\/5-236x300.jpg 236w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091324\/5-768x975.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" 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learned\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u300cactually\uff08\u786e\u5b9e\uff09\u300d\u4e00\u8bcd\u6beb\u65e0\u7528\u5904\uff0c\u4f60\u5fc5\u987b\u660e\u786e\u9648\u8ff0\u4f60\u611f\u5230\u60ca\u8bb6\u3002\u6b64\u5916\uff0c\u300cfinding yourself\uff08\u53d1\u73b0\u81ea\u5df1\uff09\u300d\u662f\u4e00\u79cd\u5bf9\u8bdd\u5f0f\u7684\u586b\u5145\u5b57\uff0c\u542c\u8d77\u6765\u5f88\u4e0d\u4e13\u4e1a\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\u907f\u514d\u4f7f\u7528\u592a\u591a\u4ecb\u8bcd\u77ed\u8bed<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4ecb\u8bcd\u662f\u5e38\u89c1\u7684\u8fde\u63a5\u8bcd\uff0c\u5982\uff1aof\u3001to\u3001for\u3001by\u3001from\u3001in\u3001on\u7b49\uff0c\u8fd9\u4e9b\u8bcd\u9ad8\u5ea6\u4f9d\u8d56\u81ea\u4f20\u7684\u4e0a\u4e0b\u6587\uff0c\u5c24\u5176\u662f\u5f53\u4f60\u53d9\u8ff0\u8fc7\u53bb\u7684\u7ecf\u5386\u65f6\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u8bf7\u4ed4\u7ec6\u9605\u8bfb\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\uff0c\u5e76\u4fee\u6539\u3001\u91cd\u6574\u53e5\u5b50\u53ca\u51cf\u5c11\u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u5b57\u6570\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\u8303\u4f8b<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4ecb\u8bcd\u77ed\u8bed\u592a\u591a\uff1a<em>\u201cI struggled to work in a team in order to get a good grade in the group project\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u51cf\u5c11\u4ecb\u8bcd\u77ed\u8bed\uff1a<em>\u201cI struggled with the team aspect of the group project\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u65e0\u9700\u9648\u8ff0\u4f60\u5728\u56e2\u961f\u4e2d\u505a\u4e8b\uff0c\u4e5f\u65e0\u9700\u63d0\u53ca\u6210\u7ee9\uff0c\u6b64\u5916\uff0c\u8fd9\u4e9b\u4ecb\u8bcd\u77ed\u8bed\u4f1a\u589e\u52a0\u53e5\u5b50\u7684\u957f\u5ea6\uff0c\u8fd9\u5c06\u4e0d\u5229\u4e8e\u7b26\u5408\u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u5b57\u6570\u8981\u6c42\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"800\" height=\"533\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091402\/6.jpg\" alt=\"\u8bf7\u4fdd\u6301\u7559\u5b66\u6587\u4e66\u7b80\u6d01\u660e\u4e86\u3001\u51cf\u5c11\u5b57\u6570\u3002\" class=\"wp-image-941\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091402\/6.jpg 800w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091402\/6-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/cn\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/08091402\/6-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">\u8bf7\u7b80\u6d01\u660e\u4e86\u3001\u51cf\u5c11\u5b57\u6570\u3002<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<h4>\u6587\u7ae0\u9700\u76f4\u63a5\u679c\u65ad<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u5b66\u751f\u7ecf\u5e38\u88ab\u63d0\u9192\uff0c\u6587\u7ae0\u8981\u907f\u514d\u63d0\u53ca\u8fc7\u4e8e\u7b3c\u7edf\u7684\u4e00\u7fa4\u4eba\u6216\u60f3\u6cd5\uff0c\u5e76\u4e14\u5728\u82f1\u6587\u5199\u4f5c\u4e2d\u5fc5\u987b\u7cbe\u51c6\u3002 \u8fd9\u53ef\u80fd\u4f1a\u5bfc\u81f4\u5199\u4f5c\u7684\u5b66\u751f\u65e0\u6cd5\u7740\u91cd\u4e8e\u5355\u4e00\u6982\u5ff5\uff0c\u800c\u4f7f\u6587\u7ae0\u53d8\u5f97\u4e0d\u679c\u51b3\u3001\u4e0d\u6709\u529b\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7f6a\u9b41\u7978\u9996\u5f80\u5f80\u662f\u8fc7\u5ea6\u4f9d\u8d56\u4fee\u9970\u8bed\uff0c\u5982\uff1a\u5f62\u5bb9\u8bcd\u548c\u526f\u8bcd\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\u8303\u4f8b<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4fee\u9970\u8bed\u592a\u591a<em>\uff1a<\/em><em>\u201cAlthough my high school grades were&nbsp;<\/em><em>sometimes<\/em>&nbsp;<em>slightly<\/em><em>&nbsp;less than average, I&nbsp;<\/em><em>was able to<\/em><em>&nbsp;outperform&nbsp;<\/em><em>many<\/em><em>&nbsp;of my classmates, who&nbsp;<\/em><em>often<\/em><em>&nbsp;struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u66f4\u5f3a\u800c\u6709\u529b\u7684\u52a8\u8bcd\u548c\u5f62\u5bb9\u8bcd\uff1a<em>\u201cAlthough my high school grades were inconsistent, I later outperformed my classmates, who struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em>&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4f60\u53ef\u4ee5\u770b\u5230\u4fee\u6539\u540e\u7684\u7248\u672c\u5c3d\u7ba1\u627f\u8ba4\u4e86\u81ea\u5df1\u8f83\u5dee\u7684\u5206\u6570\uff0c\u5374\u663e\u5f97\u66f4\u52a0\u5b9e\u5728\u3001\u4e00\u81f4\u751a\u81f3\u81ea\u4fe1\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\u4e0d\u8981\u6210\u4e3a\u53d9\u8ff0\u8005&nbsp;<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4e0d\u8981\u6d6a\u8d39\u65f6\u95f4\u91cd\u8ff0Common app\u6587\u7ae0\u9898\u76ee\u6216\u544a\u8bc9\u8bfb\u8005\u63a5\u4e0b\u6765\u5c06\u8981\u9648\u8ff0\u7684\u5185\u5bb9\uff0c\u8fd9\u5bf9\u4e8e\u4fe1\u606f\u4e30\u5bcc\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\uff08\u5982\u4f60\u73b0\u5728\u6b63\u5728\u9605\u8bfb\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\uff09\u6765\u8bf4\u6216\u8bb8\u5f88\u597d\uff0c\u4f46\u5bf9\u4e8e\u7533\u8bf7\u6587\u4e66\u5374\u4e0d\u662f\u5982\u6b64\uff0c\u800c\u79fb\u9664\u8fd9\u4e9b\u7ed3\u6784\u6027\u53d9\u8ff0\u53ef\u5927\u5e45\u964d\u4f4e\u5b57\u6570\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\u8303\u4f8b<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\u8fc7\u591a\u53d9\u8ff0\uff1a\u201cI will start by 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