{"id":921,"date":"2023-08-18T15:36:32","date_gmt":"2023-08-18T07:36:32","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.cn\/?p=921"},"modified":"2023-08-30T13:17:07","modified_gmt":"2023-08-30T05:17:07","slug":"examples-of-successful-college-personal-statements","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/examples-of-successful-college-personal-statements\/","title":{"rendered":"\u7559\u5b66\u6587\u4e66\u4e2a\u4eba\u9648\u8ff0PS(Personal Statement)\u600e\u4e48\u5199\uff1f\u8303\u6587\u6a21\u677f"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" height=\"498\" width=\"100%\" src=\"\/\/player.bilibili.com\/player.html?aid=359967522&amp;bvid=BV1rX4y1W75N&amp;cid=1238518872&amp;page=1\" scrolling=\"no\" border=\"0\" frameborder=\"no\" framespacing=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"true\"> 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Statement)\u8303\u4f8b&nbsp;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u6700\u540e\u4e00\u6b65\uff0c\u901a\u8fc7\u82f1\u6587\u6da6\u8272\u4fee\u6539\u670d\u52a1\u6539\u5584\u4f60\u7684\u4e2a\u4eba\u9648\u8ff0PS(Personal Statement)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7559\u5b66\u7533\u8bf7\u6750\u6599\u6709\u5f88\u591a\u79cd\uff0c\u4e5f\u8bb8\u5e38\u5e38\u4f1a\u8ba9\u4eba\u611f\u5230\u56f0\u60d1\uff0c\u5728\u4ecb\u7ecd\u4e2a\u4eba\u9648\u8ff0\u7c7b\u6587\u4e66\u8be5\u5982\u4f55\u51c6\u5907\u4e4b\u524d\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u5148\u7b80\u8981\u4ecb\u7ecd\u4e00\u4e0b\u4e00\u4e9b\u7ecf\u5e38\u770b\u5230\u7684\u6587\u4e66\u79cd\u7c7b\uff1a<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Personal statement for college 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target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Coalition Application<\/a>\u00a0(\u7f8e\u56fd\u5927\u5b66\u8054\u5408\u7533\u8bf7\u7cfb\u7edf),\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/apply.universityofcalifornia.edu\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">UC Application<\/a>\u00a0(\u52a0\u5dde\u7533\u8bf7\u7cfb\u7edf)\uff0c\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.ucas.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">UCAS<\/a>\u00a0(\u82f1\u56fd\u5927\u5b66\u8054\u62db\u7cfb\u7edf) \u91cc\u5e38\u5e38\u4f1a\u7ed9\u51fa\u5f88\u591aPrompt\u8ba9\u7533\u8bf7\u8005\u9009\u62e9\u8fdb\u884c\u7b54\u9898\u5199\u4f5c\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Supplemental essay 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Thank you in advance for taking the time to read my letter.&nbsp;<br><br>I am currently studying for a bachelor&#8217;s degree in Public Finance and Supply Chain Management at ________ University. I have decided to apply to your Supply Chain Management programme because I am sure it would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. Moreover , I consider this programme as a great opportunity to get to know ________ culture and its well-developed logistic background. I am also very curious about the different approaches taken in this field at a prominent university.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>I have chosen to apply to the University of________ because it examines all types of supply chain management perspectives, from production to services. During my previous studies, I discovered that simply working on procurement is far from enough. My fellow students and I had the opportunity to create an e-commerce project. At the time, the only thing in our control was the procurement decision, but I soon realized I had the capacity and drive to learn more about solutions and innovations.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>Another reason I am applying for this programme at ________ is its close relationship with relevant companies in my desired field. I learned on the university&#8217;s website that there is a specific resource that helps to connect students with these companies. Since I am interested in working in the Netherlands after I graduate, this resource will definitely be useful for my career. In addition, the fact that this programme offers an option to participate in an apprenticeship is very appealing to me. This could not only broaden my horizons through practical experience but also provide a chance for me to expand my connections in the industry.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>My current undergraduate studies make me highly suitable for this programme. I have learned the basic foundations of supply chain management through courses such as operations management, strategic purchasing, and inventory management. I have also taken mathematics and statistics to help me understand data problems.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>In addition to my academic interests, I have a full and interesting life off-campus. I was a member of our school volleyball team, which won several championships; this led to me graduating as an honour&#8217;s student. Those times spent on the court have strengthened my team spirit and my ability to work under pressure. During summer vacations, I spend time travelling around Europe and the United States. My first experience in Amsterdam was unforgettable, and it made me consider coming back in the future. Planning the trip carefully , and living alone in an unfamiliar area, have turned me into a more independent young woman.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>Professionally, I have done internships in international companies such as Red Bull and ASUS. These experiences gave me the chance to work in a global context with people from different countries, which has encouraged me to have a more flexible and adaptive mindset. Because of these wonderful experiences, I am certain I will conquer all future challenges and make the most out of them.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>In conclusion, I am very eager to study Supply Chain Management at the University of ________, as it would give me a chance to deepen my skills and knowledge in one of the field&#8217;s top universities. I am confident I excel in this programme due to my solid educational foundation in business and personality strengths.<\/em><br><br><em>Thank you again for reading my personal statement. 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Based on this fact, I researched colleges that have both a strong computer science program and co-op program, and this is when I found Hofstra. I visited the campus for a tour and was really impressed with what I saw. Not only are the campus facilities top-notch, but the advanced computer science labs are world class. This shows Hofstra&#8217;s focus to be able to provide the best intellectual and technical resources for students. I asked my tour guide about the class sizes and curriculum style. I was thrilled when he told me that average class sizes are in the 20s and that the curriculum emphasizes experiential learning.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>I am looking for more than just academic excellence; extracurricular activities, including community service opportunities, are also very important to me. In researching schools that would provide students with the most well-rounded lifestyles, I was amazed to see the number of philanthropic events that the school hosts and supports. Philanthropy seems ingrained in the school&#8217;s culture. I also saw hundreds of clubs that can cater to everyone&#8217;s unique interests. Students are also welcome to start new clubs if no existing clubs can foster their interests.<\/em><br><br><em>The energy on campus is something that I noticed right away. Both the students and staff show a lot of pride for Hofstra, and it&#8217;s truly memorable how enthusiastic the school spirit is among students. Leaving home to attend college is a big change for everyone, and I think school pride and a strong sense of community will help me make a smooth transition. I was very happy to hear that students get two tickets to events on campus. This is especially great because I am a sports fan and would love to experience the electric game day atmosphere of a division one basketball game and cheer on the Lions!<\/em><br><br><em>Hofstra&#8217;s location is also ideal because it has the advantages of being in a smaller town but also being very close to New York City. I do not want to attend college in a big city, but the fact that New York city is so close opens up a lot of opportunities. First off, there are numerous internships at top companies in the city. In addition, it would be great to visit the city from time to time and see a show or sports game. Being able to do that with friends would give me great experiences and memories.&nbsp;<\/em><br><br><em>Hofstra is my top choice because it fulfills my most important criteria: esteemed faculty members, a strong computer science program, a strong sense of belonging, amazing internship and community service opportunities, and a diverse campus. 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