{"id":559,"date":"2017-04-05T16:48:00","date_gmt":"2017-04-05T08:48:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.cn\/?p=559"},"modified":"2025-04-04T13:23:55","modified_gmt":"2025-04-04T05:23:55","slug":"stronger-writing-style","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/stronger-writing-style\/","title":{"rendered":"\u82f1\u8bed\u5b66\u672f\u5199\u4f5c\u6280\u5de7\uff1a\u6539\u5584\u8d58\u8bcd\u4e0e\u8bed\u6001\u7b49\u95ee\u9898"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u6709\u770b\u8fc7\u6211\u4eec<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/2016-report-common-english-writing-errors\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">2016\u5e74\u5ea6\u62a5\u544a: \u975e\u82f1\u6587\u6bcd\u8bed\u8005\u5e38\u89c1\u5199\u4f5c\u8bef\u533a<\/a>\uff0c\u4f60\u53ef\u80fd\u6709\u53d1\u73b0\u5176\u4e2d32 %\u7684\u9519\u8bef\u662f\u4e0e\u98ce\u683c\u89c4\u8303\u76f8\u5173\u3002 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of purpose)\u552f\u4e00\u529f\u80fd\u5c31\u662f\u4ecb\u7ecd\u4f60\u662f\u8c01\uff0c\u53ef\u60f3\u800c\u77e5\u91cc\u9762\u7684\u4e3b\u89d2\u5c31\u662f\u4f60\u5e76\u4e14\u5f3a\u8c03\u4f60\u7684\u51b3\u7b56\u80fd\u529b\u4e0e\u5728\u4e0d\u540c\u72b6\u51b5\u4e2d\u4f60\u7684\u5904\u7406\u52a8\u4f5c\u3002\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u4f7f\u7528\u88ab\u52a8\u8bed\u6001\uff0c\u4e2a\u4eba\u9648\u8ff0\u4f1a\u900f\u51fa\u4e00\u79cd\u300c\u6211\u8ba9\u4e8b\u60c5\u5c31\u8fd9\u6837\u53d1\u751f\u4e86\u300d\u7684\u6c1b\u56f4\u3002\u6211\u60f3\u5e94\u8be5\u6ca1\u6709\u5b66\u6821\u60f3\u8981\u5f55\u53d6\u4e00\u4f4d\u4e0d\u79ef\u6781\u6216\u88ab\u52a8\u7b49\u5f85\u4e8b\u60c5\u53d1\u751f\u7684\u4eba\u5427\uff1f<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\u90a3\u8be5\u600e\u4e48\u6539\u5584\u5199\u4f5c\u98ce\u683c\u5462?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h3>1. \u88ab\u52a8\u8bed\u6001<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>\u4fee\u6539\u88ab\u52a8\u8bed\u6001\uff1a<\/strong>\u627e\u51fa\u53e5\u5b50\u7684\u771f\u6b63\u4e3b\u8bcd\u5e76\u91cd\u65b0\u6392\u5217\u6210\u4e3b\u52a8\u8bed\u6001\u7684\u5178\u578b\u53e5\u578b\u300c\u4e3b\u8bcd + \u52a8\u8bcd + \u53d7\u8bcd\u300d\uff0c\u6765\u770b\u770b\u4ee5\u4e0b\u8303\u6587\uff1a\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0The speech was given by\u00a0the mayor. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0The mayor gave the speech.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0 Noun2 + \u201cbe\u201d + past participle of Verb + by + Noun1 \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark> <mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">Noun1 + Verb + Noun2<\/mark><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c2\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8d44\u8baf\uff0c\u53ef\u53c2\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u94fe\u63a5:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/%20owl\/resource\/539\/05\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>2. \u8d58\u8bcd<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u8d58\u8bcd\u7684\u539f\u56e0\u6709\u5f88\u591a\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a\u8fc7\u591a\u7684\u4ecb\u8bcd\u5b50\u53e5\u3001\u586b\u5145\u8bcd\u548c\u52a8\u8bcd\u540d\u8bcd\u5f62\u3002\u6211\u4eec\u9488\u5bf9\u5404\u4e2a\u95ee\u9898\u90fd\u6709\u63d0\u4f9b\u6587\u7ae0\u8bf4\u660e:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/improve-writing-eliminate-prepositions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8d85\u8fc7\u8bba\u6587\u5b57\u6570\u9650\u5236\uff0c\u6211\u80fd\u600e\u4e48\u6539?\u6d88\u9664\u4ecb\u8bcd<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0in addition to \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0also<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0take into consideration \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0consider<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/avoid-fillers-powerful-writing\/\">\u82f1\u6587\u5199\u4f5c\u65f6\u522b\u518d\u4f7f\u7528<\/a><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/avoid-fillers-powerful-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8fd9<\/a><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/avoid-fillers-powerful-writing\/\">24\u4e2a\u586b\u5145\u5b57(Filler Words)\u8ddf\u7247\u8bed!<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This is actually good \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This is good.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I just want to say I like this song. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like this song.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8bba\u6587\u5b57\u6570\u8d85\u8fc7\u9650\u5236\u65f6\uff0c\u8be5\u5982\u4f55\u7f29\u51cf?\u4fee\u6539\u52a8\u8bcd\u540d\u8bcd\u5f62<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0He must make a decision about his future. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0He must decide his future.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This study takes many factors into consideration.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This study considers many factors. OR This study contemplates many factors.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u8d58\u8bcd\u5e38\u4f34\u968f\u53e6\u4e00\u4e2a\u95ee\u9898\uff0c\u5c31\u662f<strong>\u91cd\u590d\u6027\u3002<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\u9664\u975e\u662f\u4f7f\u7528\u4e13\u4e1a\u672f\u8bed\uff0c\u5426\u5219\u5e94\u8be5\u8981\u5c3d\u91cf\u907f\u514d\u5728\u77ed\u77ed\u51e0\u884c\u5185\u5c31\u91cd\u590d\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u6837\u7684\u5b57\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u4e49\u5b57<\/strong>\u6216\u8003\u8651\u4f7f\u7528\u4e0d\u540c\u53e5\u578b\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\u590d\u5408\u53e5\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u5f53\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u4e49\u5b57\u65f6\uff0c\u8bb0\u5f97\u8981\u8003\u91cf\u5199\u4f5c\u98ce\u683c\u4e0e\u5185\u5bb9\u3002<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house. The house is on a hill.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house on the hill.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c2\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8d44\u8baf\uff0c\u53ef\u53c2\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u94fe\u63a5:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/%20owl\/resource\/572\/01\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u5c0f\u6280\u5de7<\/strong>\uff1a\u5728\u4f18\u5316\u5199\u4f5c\u98ce\u683c\u7684\u8fc7\u7a0b\u4e2d\uff0c<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/cn\/proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8bed\u6cd5\u68c0\u6d4b<\/a>\u5de5\u5177\uff08\u5982 Wordvice AI\uff09\u80fd\u4e3a\u60a8\u63d0\u4f9b\u5b9e\u7528\u5e2e\u52a9\u3002\u8fd9\u7c7b\u5de5\u5177\u53ef\u4ee5\uff1a<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u81ea\u52a8\u6807\u8bb0\u88ab\u52a8\u8bed\u6001\u7ed3\u6784<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u8bc6\u522b\u8fc7\u957f\u7684\u590d\u6742\u53e5<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u68c0\u6d4b\u5197\u4f59\u8868\u8fbe\u548c\u7528\u8bcd\u91cd\u590d<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4f46\u8bf7\u6ce8\u610f\uff0c\u4f18\u79c0\u7684\u5199\u4f5c\u98ce\u683c\u6700\u7ec8\u53d6\u51b3\u4e8e\u4f5c\u8005\u7684\u5224\u65ad\u2014\u2014\u5efa\u8bae\u5c06\u8fd9\u4e9b\u5de5\u5177\u7684\u8f93\u51fa\u89c6\u4e3a\u53c2\u8003\u800c\u975e\u7edd\u5bf9\u6807\u51c6\u3002\u7279\u522b\u662f\u5bf9\u4e8e\u5b66\u672f\u8bba\u6587\u3001\u7559\u5b66\u6587\u4e66\u7b49\u91cd\u8981\u6587\u4ef6\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u63a8\u8350\u7ed3\u5408<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/cn\/proofreading\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8bed\u6cd5\u68c0\u67e5<\/a>\u5de5\u5177\u7684\u521d\u6b65\u4fee\u6b63\u4e0eWordvice<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u4e13\u4e1a\u4eba\u5de5\u6da6\u8272\u670d\u52a1<\/a>\uff0c\u4ee5\u83b7\u5f97\u6700\u4f73\u6548\u679c\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>3. \u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd\u6307\u793a\u4e0d\u6e05<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u5f53\u4f7f\u7528\u6240\u6709\u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd\u6216\u6307\u793a\u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd\u65f6\uff0c\u5c3d\u91cf\u8ba9\u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd\u79bb\u5b83\u6307\u79f0\u7684\u540d\u8bcd\u8d8a\u8fd1\u8d8a\u597d\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u4e00\u822c\u6765\u8bf4\uff0c\u628a\u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd\u8ddf\u5176\u6240\u4ee3\u79f0\u7684\u540d\u8bcd\u5206\u5f00\u4f1a\u5bb9\u6613\u8ba9\u4eba\u6df7\u6dc6\uff0c\u5c24\u5176\u662f\u4e2d\u95f4\u8fd8\u6709\u5939\u5165\u53e6\u4e00\u4e2a\u7c7b\u4f3c\u7684\u540d\u8bcd\u65f6\u3002\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a&#8221;his&#8221;\u5728&#8221;Joe gave Mark his book.&#8221;\u53e5\u4e2d\u5bb9\u6613\u8ba9\u4eba\u641e\u4e0d\u6e05\u695aJoe\u7ed9\u7684\u4e66\u5230\u5e95\u662fJoe\u7684\u8fd8\u662fMark\u7684\u3002\u60f3\u907f\u514d\u8fd9\u4e2a\u95ee\u9898\u53ef\u4ee51) \u91cd\u590d\u4f7f\u7528\u540d\u8bcd\u800c\u975e\u4ee3\u540d\u8bcd (\u4f46\u8fd9\u65b9\u6cd5\u4f1a\u9020\u6210\u91cd\u590d\u6027) \u6216 (2) \u91cd\u65b0\u6392\u5217\u53e5\u578b\uff0c\u5982\u4ee5\u4e0b\u8303\u6587:\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark his book.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark Joe&#8217;s book (awkward repetition!)\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0&#8220;Joe gave his book to Mark.&#8221; OR &#8220;Joe returned Mark&#8217;s book to him.&#8221; [\u7b2c\u4e00\u53e5\u53cd\u6620\u51fa\u4e66\u7684\u62e5\u6709\u8005\u662fJoe\u800c\u7b2c\u4e8c\u53e5\u5219\u8868\u660e\u662fMark\u7684\u3002 ]<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c2\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u4fe1\u606f\uff0c\u53ef\u53c2\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u94fe\u63a5:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/bethune.yorku.ca\/writing\/pronoun\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Bethune College, York University<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.chompchomp.com\/terms\/pronounreference.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammar Bytes<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>4.&nbsp;<strong>\u653f\u6cbb\u4e0d\u6b63\u786e\u6216\u5192\u72af\u7528\u8bcd<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u867d\u7136\u6b64\u7c7b\u9519\u8bef\u7684\u5360\u6bd4\u4e0d\u9ad8\uff0c\u4f46\u8fd8\u662f\u6709\u63d0\u51fa\u6765\u8ba8\u8bba\u7684\u4ef7\u503c\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u5728\u8fd9\u4e2a\u6765\u81ea\u4e8e\u4e0d\u540c\u80cc\u666f\u4e0e\u56fd\u5bb6\u7684\u4eba\u6bcf\u5929\u4e92\u52a8\u9891\u7e41\u7684\u65f6\u4ee3\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u5e94\u8be5\u8981\u610f\u8bc6\u5230\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u8a00\u8bed\u5c06\u5982\u4f55\u5f71\u54cd\u4ed6\u4eba\u3002\u5176\u4e2d\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u66f4\u5e94\u8be5\u8981\u6ce8\u610f\u4e0d\u8981\u968f\u610f\u53d1\u8868\u4efb\u4f55\u53ef\u80fd\u5192\u72af\u4ed6\u4eba\u7684\u8bc4\u8bba\u3002\u5728\u8fd9\u6837\u7684\u524d\u63d0\u4e4b\u4e0b\uff0c\u7814\u7a76\u5199\u4f5c\u9762\u4e34\u5de8\u5927\u7684\u8003\u9a8c\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u7814\u7a76\u65f6\u5e38\u6d89\u53ca\u4e0d\u540c\u79cd\u65cf\u3002\u5f53\u63cf\u8ff0\u4e34\u5e8a\u5b9e\u9a8c\u4e2d\u7684\u53c2\u4e0e\u8005\u6216\u793e\u4f1a\u4e2d\u7684\u7fa4\u4f53\u65f6\uff0c\u5e94\u8be5\u5c0f\u5fc3\u907f\u514d\u4f7f\u7528\u5230\u8d2c\u4f4e\u7279\u5b9a\u65cf\u7fa4\u7684\u7528\u8bed\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u5f53\u63d0\u5230\u4eba\u7fa4\u65f6\uff0c\u5c3d\u91cf\u4f7f\u7528\u6982\u62ec\u6027\u7684\u7528\u8bcd\u4ee5\u53ca\u975e\u6b67\u89c6\u6027\u7684\u5ba2\u89c2\u63cf\u8ff0\u3002\u4f46\u4e0d\u9700\u8981\u4e3a\u4e86\u8ffd\u6c42100%\u7684\u653f\u6cbb\u6b63\u786e\u800c\u538b\u529b\u8fc7\u5927\u3002\u4ee5\u4e0b\u8303\u6587\u63d0\u4f9b\u53c2\u8003:\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Each man must fend for himself.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0People should fend for themselves. [\u8fd9\u91cc\u4fee\u6b63\u4e86\u6027\u522b\u6b67\u89c6\uff0c\u53ea\u6709\u7279\u6307\u7537\u6027\u65f6\u624d\u80fd\u4f7f\u7528\u7b2c\u4e00\u53e5\u3002 ]\u00a0<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0The trauma victim&#8230; \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0The person who experienced trauma&#8230; [\u8fd9\u91cc\u4e2d\u548c\u4e86&#8221;victim&#8221;\u7684\u7684\u6c1b\u56f4\u3002\u4f7f\u7528\u4e86\u5b57\u773c\u50cf\u662f&#8221;suffered trauma&#8221;\u6216 &#8220;trauma victim&#8221;\u90fd\u4e0d\u662f\u5f88\u6070\u5f53\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u8fd9\u9690\u5c04\u51fa\u8d1f\u9762\u611f\u89c9\u4e14\u5f3a\u8c03\u4e86\u53d7\u5bb3\u7684\u6982\u5ff5\uff0c\u5bb9\u6613\u4f7f\u6709\u7c7b\u4f3c\u7ecf\u9a8c\u7684\u4eba\u611f\u5230\u4e0d\u9002\u3002 ]\u00a0<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c2\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u4fe1\u606f\uff0c\u53ef\u53c2\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u94fe\u63a5:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.gov.uk\/government\/publications\/inclusive-communication\/inclusive-language-words-to-use-and-avoid-when-writing-about-disability\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">UK Government guide on inclusive language<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>5. \u4f7f\u7528<strong>\u4fd7\u8bed(<\/strong><strong>\u975e\u6b63\u5f0f\u7528\u8bed)<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u4fd7\u8bed\u5c31\u662f\u65e5\u5e38\u751f\u6d3b\u4e2d\u4f7f\u7528\u7684\u975e\u6b63\u5f0f\u7528\u8bed\u3002 \u4e00\u822c\u6765\u8bf4\uff0c\u5b66\u672f\u3001\u5546\u4e1a\u4e0e\u7559\u5b66\u7533\u8bf7\u6587\u4e66\u90fd\u5e94\u8be5\u8981\u4f7f\u7528\u6b63\u5f0f\u7528\u6cd5\uff0c\u8fd9\u4ee3\u8868\u4e0d\u53ef\u4ee5\u4f7f\u7528\u7f29\u5199(\u4f8b\u5982: don&#8217;t, can&#8217;t, won&#8217;t, \u7b49)\u548c\u4fda\u8bed\u3002\u5927\u90e8\u5206\u7684\u60ef\u7528\u8bed\u90fd\u4e3a\u4fd7\u8bed\uff0c\u6240\u4ee5\u5982\u679c\u4e0d\u77e5\u9053\u662f\u5426\u53ef\u4ee5\u4f7f\u7528\u6b64\u7c7b\u60ef\u7528\u8bed\u65f6\uff0c\u53ef\u4ee5\u5728<a href=\"https:\/\/www.collinsdictionary.com\/dictionary\/english\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Collin&#8217;s English Dictionary\u7b49\u5b57\u5178\u4e2d\u67e5\u8be2\u3002<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c2\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8d44\u8baf\uff0c\u53ef\u53c2\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u94fe\u63a5:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/%20owlprint\/608\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/academicguides.waldenu.edu\/writingcenter\/scholarlyvoice\/academicdiction\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Walden University<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\u6211\u4eec\u5e0c\u671b\u4ee5\u4e0a\u4fe1\u606f\u80fd\u591f\u5e2e\u52a9\u4f60\u5927\u81f4\u4e86\u89e3\u5e76\u6539\u5584\u98ce\u683c\u89c4\u8303\u7684\u95ee\u9898\uff0c\u5728\u5199\u4f5c\u65f6\uff0c\u65f6\u523b\u8c28\u614e\u89c4\u5219\u80fd\u591f\u8d77\u5230\u4e00\u5b9a\u4f5c\u7528\u7684\uff0c\u4f46\u4fee\u6539\u65f6\u5efa\u8bae\u4e00\u6b21\u53ea\u4e13\u6ce8\u5728\u5b8c\u5584\u4e00\u4e2a\u9762\u5411\u6211\u4eec\u4e5f\u6b22\u8fce\u4f60\u968f\u65f6\u67e5\u770b\u4e0e \u4f7f\u7528\u6211\u4eec\u7684\u82f1\u8bed\u6da6\u8272\u670d\u52a1\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\">\u9700\u8981<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u82f1\u6587\u6da6\u8272<\/a>\uff0c<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer 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