\u8bed\u6cd5\u68c0\u67e5\u7f51\u7ad9<\/a>\u8fdb\u884c\u521d\u6b65\u7b5b\u67e5\uff0c\u80fd\u6709\u6548\u53d1\u73b0\u5927\u591a\u6570\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u9519\u8bef\uff0c\u4f46\u5bf9\u4e8e\u67d0\u4e9b\u4fee\u8f9e\u6027\u5e73\u884c\u6216\u7279\u5b9a\u5b66\u79d1\u7684\u4e13\u4e1a\u8868\u8fbe\uff0c\u4ecd\u9700\u7ed3\u5408\u4e0b\u6587\u7684\u5177\u4f53\u4fee\u6539\u65b9\u6cd5\u548c\u4eba\u5de5\u5224\u65ad\u6765\u786e\u4fdd\u6700\u4f73\u6548\u679c\u3002\u4e0b\u9762\u6211\u4eec\u5c31\u6765\u8be6\u7ec6\u4ecb\u7ecd\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u7684\u7f16\u8f91\u6280\u5de7\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u4fee\u6539\u65b9\u6cd5\u6709\u4e09\u79cd\uff0c\u76ee\u7684\u662f\u4e3a\u4e86\u8ba9\u6bcf\u4e00\u4e2a\u90e8\u5206\u7684\u8bed\u6cd5\u5f62\u5f0f\u90fd\u4e00\u81f4\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u5c06\u5229\u7528\u4e0a\u65b9\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\u4f5c\u8303\u4f8b\u8bf4\u660e\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e00\uff1a \u4fee\u6539\u5c11\u6570\u4e0e\u5176\u4ed6\u8bed\u6cd5\u5f62\u5f0f\u4e0d\u4e00\u81f4\u7684\u90e8\u5206<\/h3>\n\n\n\n \u65b9\u6cd5\u4e00\u662f\u4fee\u6b63\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u6700\u7b80\u5355\u7684\u65b9\u5f0f\uff0c\u5927\u90e8\u5206\u53e5\u5b50\u90fd\u53ef\u4ee5\u4f7f\u7528\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e00\u6765\u89e3\u51b3\uff0c\u4f46\u662f\u590d\u6742\u53e5\u6216\u5b50\u53e5\u8f83\u591a\u7684\u957f\u53e5\uff0c\u53ef\u80fd\u65e0\u6cd5\u9002\u7528\u6b64\u65b9\u6cd5\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u6709\u53ef\u80fd\u4f1a\u53d8\u52a8\u610f\u601d\uff0c\u6b64\u7c7b\u53e5\u5b50\u63a8\u8350\u4f7f\u7528\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e09\u6765\u4fee\u6b63\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n <\/strong><\/td>\n\u975e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n\u6b63\u786e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n1<\/td>\n I like<\/span> apples<\/span>, oranges<\/span>, and<\/span> going to<\/span> the zoo.<\/td>\n I like<\/span> apples<\/span>, oranges<\/span>, and<\/span> zoos<\/span>.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n2<\/td>\n The coach advised that I should<\/span> eat<\/span> healthily, exercise<\/span> regularly, and<\/span> that joining a gym would make this easier<\/span>.<\/td>\n The coach advised that I <\/span>should<\/span> eat<\/span> healthily, exercise<\/span> regularly, and<\/span> join<\/span> a gym. (Here, we lose some meaning regarding the fact that joining a gym would make exercising easier.)<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n3<\/td>\n Mary is a celebrated<\/span> author<\/span>, dancer<\/span>, and<\/span> writes<\/span> great songs.<\/td>\n Mary is a celebrated<\/span> author<\/span>, dancer<\/span>, and<\/span> songwriter<\/span>.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/figure>\n\n\n\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e8c\uff1a \u4fee\u6539\u591a\u6570\u4e0e\u5176\u4ed6\u8bed\u6cd5\u5f62\u5f0f\u4e0d\u4e00\u81f4\u7684\u90e8\u5206<\/h3>\n\n\n\n \u8981\u5c0f\u5fc3\u4f7f\u7528\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e8c\uff0c\u56e0\u4e3a\u4fee\u6539\u591a\u6570\u4ee5\u914d\u5408\u5c11\u6570\u7684\u8bed\u6cd5\u5f62\u5f0f\u5bb9\u6613\u5bfc\u81f4\u53e5\u5b50\u91cd\u590d\u6027\u9ad8\uff0c\u89c1\u53e5\u4e00\uff0c\u56e0\u6b64\u6211\u4eec\u53ea\u63a8\u8350\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e00\u3002\u53e6\u5916\uff0c\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e8c\u4e5f\u65e0\u6cd5\u907f\u514d\u53d8\u52a8\u53e5\u5b50\u610f\u601d\u7684\u98ce\u9669\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n <\/strong><\/td>\n\u975e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n\u6b63\u786e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n1<\/td>\n I like<\/span> apples<\/span>, oranges<\/span>, and<\/span> going to<\/span> the zoo.<\/td>\n I like<\/span><\/span> eating apples<\/span><\/span>, eating oranges<\/span><\/span>, and<\/span> going to the zoo<\/span><\/span> (\u201ceating\u201d is repetitive).<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n2<\/td>\n The coach advised that I should<\/span> eat<\/span> healthily, exercise<\/span> regularly, and<\/span> that joining a gym would make this easier<\/span>.<\/td>\n The coach recommended<\/span><\/span> exercising<\/span> regularly, eating<\/span> healthily, and<\/span> joining<\/span> a gym. (Here, we lose some meaning regarding the fact that joining a gym would make exercising easier.)<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n3<\/td>\n Mary is a celebrated<\/span> author<\/span>, dancer<\/span>, and<\/span> writes<\/span> great songs.<\/td>\n Mary is celebrated because<\/span> <\/span>she<\/span><\/span> writes<\/span> books, dances<\/span>, and<\/span><\/span> writes<\/span> great songs.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/figure>\n\n\n\u65b9\u6cd5\u4e09\uff1a \u62c6\u89e3\u53e5\u5b50<\/h3>\n\n\n\n \u6709\u65f6\u5019\u4fee\u6539\u53e5\u5b50\u53ef\u80fd\u9700\u8981\u5c06\u53e5\u5b50\u91cd\u7ec4\uff0c\u5426\u5219\u53ef\u80fd\u4f1a\u610f\u5916\u53d8\u52a8\u5230\u539f\u610f\u3002\u4e3a\u907f\u514d\u5931\u53bb\u53e5\u5b50\u539f\u610f\uff0c\u6211\u4eec\u5efa\u8bae\u5c06\u53e5\u5b50\u884d\u4f38\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n <\/strong><\/td>\n\u975e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n\u6b63\u786e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n1<\/td>\n I like<\/span> apples<\/span>, oranges<\/span>, and<\/span> going to<\/span> the zoo.<\/td>\n I like<\/span> eating<\/span> apples<\/span> and<\/span> oranges<\/span>. I also like<\/span> going<\/span> to the zoo.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n2<\/td>\n The coach advised that I should<\/span> eat<\/span> healthily, exercise<\/span> regularly, and<\/span> that joining a gym would make this easier<\/span>.<\/td>\n The coach advised that I should<\/span> eat<\/span> healthily and<\/span> exercise<\/span> regularly. He<\/span> also told me that<\/span> joining a gym would make working out easier.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\n3<\/td>\n Mary is a celebrated<\/span> author<\/span>, dancer<\/span>, and<\/span> writes<\/span> great songs.<\/td>\n Mary is<\/span> a celebrated author<\/span> and<\/span> dancer<\/span>. She also<\/span> writes<\/span> great songs.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/figure>\n\n\n\u6ce8\u610f: \u6bd4\u8f83\u53e5<\/h2>\n\n\n\n \u591a\u6570\u7b80\u5355\u7684\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5\u5b50\u90fd\u662f\u7531”and,” “or,” \u6216”but.”\u5bf9\u7b49\u8fde\u63a5\u8bcd\u6240\u8fde\u63a5\uff0c\u5176\u4ed6\u8f83\u590d\u6742\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\u7ed3\u6784\u5219\u4ee4\u4eba\u76f8\u5f53\u56f0\u6270\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982: \u4fee\u9970\u5b50\u53e5\u7684\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784(\u4f8b:\u5173\u7cfb\u5b50\u53e5\u548c\u5206\u8bcd\u5b50\u53e5) \u548c\u6bd4\u8f83\u5b50\u53e5(\u4f8b:\u76f8\u5173\u8fde\u63a5\u8bcd)\u3002<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\u5173\u7cfb\u5b50\u53e5\u4f7f\u7528”that”\u6216”which.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n \u5206\u8bcd\u5b50\u53e5\u7531\u52a8\u8bcd\u7ec4\u6210\uff0c\u529f\u80fd\u5982\u5f62\u5bb9\u8bcd\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982:”This car is built to last.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n \u76f8\u5173\u8fde\u63a5\u8bcd\u6709 “not only…but also,” “either…or,” “neither…nor,” “if…then,” \u7b49\u7b49<\/li>\n\n\n\n \u6bd4\u8f83\u53e5\u7684\u8fde\u63a5\u8bcd\u5178\u578b\u7684\u6709 “than” \u6216 “as.”<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n\u4ee5\u4e0a\u7684\u53e5\u578b\u7686\u987b\u8981\u4f7f\u7528\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784!<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n\u5728\u4fee\u6539\u8fd9\u4e00\u7c7b\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\u65f6\uff0c \u627e\u5230\u524d\u540e\u90e8\u5206\u5e76\u68c0\u67e5\u662f\u5426\u4e24\u8fb9\u90fd\u662f\u540c\u6837\u7684\u8bed\u6cd5\u5f62\u5f0f\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\u975e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n\u6b63\u786e\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u53e5<\/strong><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\nI like the big house built in<\/span> 1910 and<\/span><\/span> features<\/span> two great living rooms.<\/td>\n I like the big house built in 1910 that<\/span> features two great living rooms. (Eliminate the problematic parallel structure by removing the conjunction.)<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\nMary owns a PR company, a place giving <\/span>many growth opportunities and<\/span> where<\/span> people are rewarded based on merit (participial phrase + subordinate clause)<\/span>.<\/td>\n Mary owns a PR company, a place giving<\/span> many growth opportunities where<\/span> people are rewarded based on merit. (Deleting the \u201cand\u201d fixes the parallelism issue. This method works for most cases where a participial phrase and subordinate clause are connected by a conjunction.)<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\nI not only<\/span> like to<\/span> play the violin, but also<\/span> dancing<\/span>.<\/td>\n I not only<\/span> like to play<\/span><\/span> the violin, but I also<\/span> like to dance<\/span><\/span>.not only<\/span> play<\/span> the violin but also<\/span> dance.<\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\nEither<\/span> we go<\/span> to the store now or<\/span> wait<\/span> until next week.<\/td>\n Either<\/span> we go<\/span> to the store now or<\/span> we wait<\/span> until next week.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n\nI prefer<\/span> to go<\/span> on a vacation than<\/span> a bonus<\/span>.<\/td>\n I prefer<\/span> to go on a vacation<\/span><\/span> than<\/span> to receive a bonus<\/span><\/span>.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<\/figure>\n\n\n\u6ce8\u610f:\u52a8\u8bcd\u65f6\u6001\u8f6c\u6362<\/h2>\n\n\n\n \u53e6\u4e00\u4e2a\u4ee4\u4eba\u7ea0\u7ed3\u7684\u5e73\u884c\u7ed3\u6784\u662f\u52a8\u8bcd\u8f6c\u6362\u3002\u56de\u60f3\u770b\u770b\u4f60\u662f\u5426\u6709\u8bf4\u8fc7\u7c7b\u4f3c\u4ee5\u4e0b\u7684\u53e5\u5b50:<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\n“I really like this movie, which was why I bought it.”<\/li>\n\n\n\n We knew that we had little time, work had to be finished, and we needed to hurry.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n\u611f\u89c9\u5f88\u81ea\u7136\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\uff0c\u4f60\u53d1\u73b0\u9519\u5728\u54ea\u4e86\u5417??<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\n\u201cI really like<\/span> this movie, which<\/span> was<\/span> why I bought it.\u201d<\/li>\n\n\n\nWe knew that<\/span> we had<\/span> little time, work<\/span> had to be finished<\/span>, and<\/span> we needed<\/span> to hurry.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n\u53e5\u4e00\u7684\u65f6\u6001\u4ece\u73b0\u5728\u8f6c\u5230\u8fc7\u53bb\u800c\u53e5\u4e8c\u5219\u5728that\u53e5\u5b50\u7a81\u7136\u8f6c\u6362\u6210\u88ab\u52a8\u8bed\u6001\u3002\u73b0\u5728\u6765\u4fee\u6b63\u53e5\u5b50\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\n\u201cI really like<\/span> this movie, which<\/span> is<\/span> why I bought it.\u201d<\/li>\n\n\n\nWe knew that<\/span> we had<\/span> little time, we had<\/span> to finish the work, and<\/span> we needed to<\/span><\/span> hurry.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n