{"id":1790,"date":"2022-09-19T15:18:04","date_gmt":"2022-09-19T07:18:04","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.cn\/?p=1790"},"modified":"2024-12-12T15:07:56","modified_gmt":"2024-12-12T07:07:56","slug":"5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.cn\/blog\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/","title":{"rendered":"\u7559\u5b66\u7533\u8bf7\u6587\u4e66\u5e94\u907f\u514d\u76845\u5927\u9519\u8bef"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"YouTube video player\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/I5LGRIurtac\" width=\"850\" height=\"400\" frameborder=\"0\" 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This event was a disparate result antithetical to my character\u8fd9\u4e8b\u4ef6\u662f\u8fdd\u80cc\u6211\u6027\u683c\u7684\u7ed3\u679c\u300d\uff0c\u4e0d\u5982\u5c55\u73b0\u4e2a\u4eba\u610f\u8bc6\u5e76\u4e14\u76f4\u622a\u4e86\u5f53\u7684\u8868\u8fbe\u3002\u4ee5\u4e0b\u4e3a\u8868\u8fbe\u8fd9\u79cd\u89c2\u70b9\u7684\u66f4\u597d\u65b9\u5f0f\uff1a\u300c his is a decision I am not proud of, but it helped me learn a valuable lesson and put me in a better place today. 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