2018免费修改留学申请文书活动_第四周幸运儿公布

第四周两位中奖幸运儿的修改完稿已经列出于最下方,请大家下滑参考。

第一周幸运儿的修改完稿传送门这边; 想参考第二,三周幸运儿的修改完稿传送门这边

修改完稿内可以看见 1.追踪修订痕迹(轻松比对修改前后文), 2. 右边是母语编辑的整体评价跟细部评价(例如单字选用或冗句删除的原因)。

*修改标准为官网付费标准

 


第四周幸运儿使用心得:

Wordvice 的这次文书修改,虽然是免费的,但是看得出来的确很用心。
从一词一句,到提供的意见,都可见修改老师的认真程度。
一些替换,小到介词大到句型,都使我的文书看起来更加流畅表达更加地道,你们的修改让我的文书提高了一个档次,非常感谢!

由编辑Tara H.修改

Comment:

Thank you for letting me assist you with this personal statement and for using wordvice.cn.
I found that your statement was structured into logical paragraphs, and it was specific, detailed, and informative for the admissions committee. Due to wordiness, revisions attempted to clarify your ideas more briefly and reduce word count overall.
Revisions also improved word choice, sentence structure, conventions and verb tense.
I suggest you review all my marginal comments and suggestions for further revision.
If you need any assistance in the future, please feel free to request me (Tara H.) by name.

修改完稿:

第四周免费润色文书幸运儿公开 英语文书模板

第二位幸运儿

编辑Comment:

Overall, this is a great resume that could benefit from more specificity. For instance, you should make it clear what you were looking for in your research experiments (ie., your hypotheses), how you analyzed your results, and whether or not you were successful.

Please feel free to request me by name (josh V.), should you need editing in the future.

第二位幸运儿使用感想:

看了编辑提供的建议之后让我知道我的简历还有哪里不足,让我能够修改

制作内容更精确的CV

如果还有需要的话我会再与您们连络

谢谢您们提供免费润色的机会

RESUME1-1RESUME1-2

 

 

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