让大家久等了，第二周两位中奖幸运儿的修改完稿已经列出于下方，这次的编辑跟上周的不一样。想参加的同学，请参考活动办法。
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修改完稿内可以看见 1.追踪修订痕迹(轻松比对修改前后文)， 2. 右边是母语编辑的整体评价跟细部评价(例如单字选用或冗句删除的原因)。
*修改标准为官网付费标准

第三份文件:由编辑Max修改
Comment:
Your SOP is fairly well organized and you’ve have taken some strong initial steps to explain your experiences and interests. I flagged some potential issues below for your review below and I have made substantial sentence-level edits to refine and clarify your writing.

修改完稿:

第四份文件：由编辑Rachel修改
Comment: 
In this SOP, you clearly show that you are passionate about this subject and are eager to prove that you have the qualifications to enter this program. Per your instructions, I have focused my edits on only the words in black, not in red. I have enhanced the overall English grammar, word choice, and punctuation of your writing. Please review each of my edits so that your English writing can improve even more in the future. Good luck!

学生修改返馈:

修改完稿：

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