修改完稿内可以看见 1.追踪修订痕迹(轻松比对修改前后文)， 2. 右边是母语编辑的整体评价跟细部评价(例如单字选用或冗句删除的原因)。
Overall, your CV has an appealing design and a fairly clear organization. There are several areas that would benefit from additional attention, which I have highlighted below for your review. I have also made structural, formatting, and sentence-level edits.
真的很谢谢你们！原本还有点担心不知道要给什么回馈， 看完润色后的结果我真的很开心， 超乎我预期的好！感谢你们替我将简历经营得更有层次， 比之前更能清晰凸显我的优势～ 谢谢你们：） 我会推荐给我的朋友的！
Overall, your English writing in this letter of recommendation is strong. You have provided several specific examples and anecdotes of how this student exceeds expectations and is dedicated to his work. I have focused my edits on perfecting your English grammar through sentence structure, word choice, and increasing the clarity and sophistication of your writing. Please review each my revisions carefully, and happy editing!