免费修改留学申请文书_最后一周幸运儿公布

美国本科申请,美国研究所申请

College Admissions EssayBoot Camp (2)

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第五份文件:由编辑Max修改

Comment:

Overall, your CV has an appealing design and a fairly clear organization. There are several areas that would benefit from additional attention, which I have highlighted below for your review. I have also made structural, formatting, and sentence-level edits.

学生修改心得:

真的很谢谢你们!原本还有点担心不知道要给什么回馈, 看完润色后的结果我真的很开心, 超乎我预期的好!感谢你们替我将简历经营得更有层次, 比之前更能清晰凸显我的优势~ 谢谢你们:) 我会推荐给我的朋友的!

修改完稿:

 

Fifth week_CV_1

 




第六份文件:由编辑Rachel修改

Comment: 

Overall, your English writing in this letter of recommendation is strong. You have provided several specific examples and anecdotes of how this student exceeds expectations and is dedicated to his work. I have focused my edits on perfecting your English grammar through sentence structure, word choice, and increasing the clarity and sophistication of your writing. Please review each my revisions carefully, and happy editing!

修改完稿:

 

Fifth week_RL_2

 

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